Finally, a first page that won't make me hate myself in the morning. I feel as I've sufficiently indulged my masochistic hardon for a) crowd scenes b) backgrounds and c) manservants in turbans.
Obviously, this is a raw version -- it still needs dialogue, a better scan of the last panel, and some tones. But it's a start!
Thanks man! I'm trying to compose these panels in a way that's cinematic without being crazydynamic in the way of American comics, so I really appreciate the feedback.
Wow, beautiful start! Loving the different angles, esp that ground level one you start with. One of those visual feasts your're always hearing about...
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I'm sold. Your story looks so exotic and amazing and-- and, oh, this is great already. This page has me looking at it over and over for all the beautiful details. I've hit the +fav button with the force of the fist of an angry god.
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I'm sold. Your story looks so exotic and amazing and-- and, oh, this is great already. This page has me looking at it over and over for all the beautiful details. I've hit the +fav button with the force of the fist of an angry god.
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ONRY FOR YOU
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